Principles of Composition

After reading the section, I think they the principle that I have the most trouble with is omitting needless words. I think I acquired this during my time in journalism where the more elaborate the wording was the more likely someone in our school was to actually read it. I think that to try and correct the problem with this, I could take more time in revision to run words through the thesaurusto try and come up with maybe one or two words that could condense down all of the other words that I have used.

One thing that I think I am better at is paragraph composition.